스피킹&오픽 첨삭게시판 토익스피킹&OPIc 연습을 해보고 내가 만든 답안에 대한 의견을 들어보는 게시판 입니다.
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- 2018.05.12
1. 동네 소개와 묘사
I stay in Gangneung. Gangneung is a small town. Tere is only buses, but no subway in my neighborhood. The buses don't often work for a day. It makes me uncomfortable.
Around my campus, There are a hill, a lake, and fields. In the downtown, There are theaters, a big supermarket and various stores. My neighborhood is boring and quiet, but clean and peaceful. I think It is a good place to live, If you have a car.
2. 이웃 묘사
I will tell you my neighbors at my home in Seoul. I think my neighbor is kind and nice. They have married and have two children. I don't know what they do for a work because I never ask them it. We usually just greet each other. I just know that they go to a church on the weekends.
They raise the dog named 까뮈. I sometimes meet him on the yard where in front of my house. They and I share the yard and the front gate.
3. 동네에서 있었던 기억에 남는 경험
The most memorable experience in my neighborhood was when I met 까뮈 who is the dog of my neighbor at the first time. When I opened the front door which is shared by them and me, 까뮈 ran so fast from front of their house to me. I was embarrassed by the situation. But as soon as he stopped and barked in fornt of me, I realized that he never bite me. He was just scared of me. Soon, his owner came and apologized to me. I said It's OK.
Sometime I face with 까뮈 and he still barks to me. But I like him. I just want to get along with him.
4. 과거와 현재의 동네 비교
When I was young, I lived in 광안리 in Busan. 광안리 is the beach. There were a few cafes, restaurants and stores. If I wanted to watch movies, I had to take a bus for around 30 minutes. My neighborhood was very boring.
But now There are a lot of cafes such as Starbucks, restaurants serving many kinds of foods and stores which sell several types of products. Theaters were built near 광안리, So I'm able to go there to walk.
At night, Many people walk around there. 광안리 is crowded of people everyday. It's lively.
첨삭 부탁드립니다. 감사합니다.
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