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My name is park si eun. I am 24 years old. I live in my parent’s house in daejeon with my little sister.

I’m currently a senior majoring in material science and engineering.

I chose this major because I want to study materials.

My hobbies these days include listening to piano classical music. My favorite pianist is ‘seong jin choi’. His performance makes me really excited always impresses me. His performance of ‘Moonlight’ is so delicate it always reminds me of the moon.

and I really enjoying enjoy watching F1 race. Every time seeing a car running fast, I feel great catharsis. You can have a lot of fun whenever a car catches up with another car.

Someday I hope to work for a major company. I want to be an expert in the semiconductor field. The competition is fierce in today’s job market, so I want to study hard to make my dream a reality.

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My best friend is hyeon ju seong. I’ve known her since childhood.

we were in the same class in middle school.

we have been best best buddies ever since the first time we met.

Now he she is a senior at se jong university majoring in computer engineering.

regarding her appearance, She’s got black eyes and black hair. She is shorter than me she is thin.

As for her personality, she has calm nature. No matter what happens, she takes thing calmly.

I want to learn how she handles her work.

I like her because we are on the same wavelength.

In fact, We have similar personality. we are quite introverted and hate to go to noisy place.

We like to go to famous restaurant restaurants, and when a new movie is released, we go to the theater to see watch the movie.

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