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- 2023.01.08
[돌발-은행] Have you ever experienced any problems at a bank? For instance,
sometimes ATMs malfunction. What sort of problem did you face, and how did you
deal with it?
A big problem I had at a bank happened last
year when I went to a the bank to open a
new account. As soon as I arrived at the bank, I took a number and sat on the
chair to wait in line. There were already over 10 people in front of me when I
took the number. It was obvious that I had to wait for a long time.
After I waited for about 1 hour patiently,
I felt a bit hungry and my turn didn’t seem to come shortly. So, I decided to
go out for a second and grab a sandwich. After I returned with a full stomach, to my surprise, my turn had been given
to someone else. I asked an employee if he could make an exception for me, but
the answer from him was no. So, I had no choice but to take a number again and
wait another hours hour. When it was all
over, I was so upset for I had wasted my time. From this incident, I learned to
wait in line patiently without leaving.
[돌발-호텔] Tell me about the hotels in your country. Where are they usually
located? Do they have any facilities that are unique to your country? Give as
many details as possible.
There are hundreds of hotels in Korea. They
are mostly located in Seoul since Seoul is the most popular tourist destination
in Korea. However, there are also hotels in the countryside
as well.
The hotels in the
countryside are usually built in a way that blends well with nature. The walls
are typically white because the color gives off a clean and pure image to the
hotels. In addition, although the hotels are located in the countryside, most of them are still well-maintained and
well-furnished. Some of the rooms might have Korean traditional under-the-floor
heating systems as well.
In my opinion, the hotels outside Seoul are
a recommendable option for those who want to escape from the daily grind. Not
only are do they offer beautiful views of
nature, but they are
also are cost-effective compared to the hotels in Seoul.
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번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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[학원 이벤트] 토스·오픽 10일 끝장반★빡센관리로 토스AL·오픽IH☞ [5] | 해토지기 | 3058 | ||
[인강 이벤트] 토스·오픽인강+응시료 0원★교재제공☞ [5] | 해토지기 | 10026 | ||
[정보] 토익스피킹 점수예측 풀서비스 200% 활용방법 [5] | 해토지기 | 2261 | ||
8492 | [OPIc] 오픽 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 정서영 | 29 | 2024.04.24 |
8491 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 첨삭 답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 28 | 2024.04.24 |
8490 | 첨삭 부탁 드립니다. | 영린이 | 43 | 2024.04.23 |
8489 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 답변드립니다. [1] | 첨삭지기 | 52 | 2024.04.24 |
8488 | [스피킹] 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 김*흔 | 28 | 2024.04.22 |
8487 | [스피킹] RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다.. | 첨삭지기 | 27 | 2024.04.22 |
8486 | [스피킹] 해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드려요!! | 전*성 | 13 | 2024.04.22 |
8485 | [스피킹] RE:해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다!! | 첨삭지기 | 16 | 2024.04.22 |
8484 | [스피킹] 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 최*화 | 9 | 2024.04.22 |
8483 | [스피킹] RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 10 | 2024.04.22 |
8482 | [스피킹] 해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 배*주 | 12 | 2024.04.22 |
8481 | [스피킹] RE:해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 11 | 2024.04.22 |
8480 | 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 영린이 | 33 | 2024.04.19 |
8479 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 답변드립니다. [1] | 첨삭지기 | 52 | 2024.04.19 |
8478 | [스피킹] 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다. | 이*****y | 33 | 2024.04.17 |
8477 | [스피킹] RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭자기 | 28 | 2024.04.17 |
8476 | [스피킹] 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드려요. | **riel | 23 | 2024.04.17 |
8475 | [스피킹] RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 26 | 2024.04.17 |
8474 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다. [3] | 영린이 | 50 | 2024.04.15 |
8473 | [스피킹] 첨삭부탁드려요!! | **riel | 25 | 2024.04.15 |
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