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[돌발-은행] Have you ever experienced any problems at a bank? For instance, sometimes ATMs malfunction. What sort of problem did you face, and how did you deal with it?

 

A big problem I had at a bank happened last year when I went to a the bank to open a new account. As soon as I arrived at the bank, I took a number and sat on the chair to wait in line. There were already over 10 people in front of me when I took the number. It was obvious that I had to wait for a long time.

After I waited for about 1 hour patiently, I felt a bit hungry and my turn didn’t seem to come shortly. So, I decided to go out for a second and grab a sandwich. After I returned with a full stomach, to my surprise, my turn had been given to someone else. I asked an employee if he could make an exception for me, but the answer from him was no. So, I had no choice but to take a number again and wait another hours hour. When it was all over, I was so upset for I had wasted my time. From this incident, I learned to wait in line patiently without leaving.

 

 

[돌발-호텔] Tell me about the hotels in your country. Where are they usually located? Do they have any facilities that are unique to your country? Give as many details as possible.

 

There are hundreds of hotels in Korea. They are mostly located in Seoul since Seoul is the most popular tourist destination in Korea. However, there are also hotels in the countryside as well.

The hotels in the countryside are usually built in a way that blends well with nature. The walls are typically white because the color gives off a clean and pure image to the hotels. In addition, although the hotels are located in the countryside, most of them are still well-maintained and well-furnished. Some of the rooms might have Korean traditional under-the-floor heating systems as well.

In my opinion, the hotels outside Seoul are a recommendable option for those who want to escape from the daily grind. Not only are do they offer beautiful views of nature, but they are also are cost-effective compared to the hotels in Seoul.

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