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The place where I live is a small apartment in Daejeon where I went to the university. It is located in the middle of the city so it’s really convenient to go almost everywhere in the city. Also, there is an awesome park about ten minutes away on foot. These two are the best things to be living here for me.

It is a typical small apartment in the city which has 2 small rooms and a living room, a kitchen beside a living room and also has a small veranda. The distinguishing mark of my place apart from others is that it has a full-length mirror on the door between the living room and the one of my rooms. It is not that big and not as good quality as the one you buy at the market but I often use it as it is very convenient. And we have a lot of plants like a fleshy plant and cactus in the veranda and the living room. My mum loves them and she’s pretty good at looking after plants.

Actually, I used to prefer a house to an apartment to live especially when I lived in New Zealand because for me, houses in New Zealand are quite convenient. They are separated by floors and have food disposal in the kitchen so you don’t have to go out to throw it away every day like apartments in Korea. For now Now, I also like apartments for some reasons though.

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