스피킹&오픽 첨삭게시판 토익스피킹&OPIc 연습을 해보고 내가 만든 답안에 대한 의견을 들어보는 게시판 입니다.
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- 2018.05.12
1. 집의 모습 묘사
I live in a dormitory in my college. There are a lot of rooms for students, shared toilets, laundry rooms and lounges by levels. The building has 3rd floors.
My room is the 3rd floor. I use our room with my roommate. The room is too tiny to stay for two.
Our room has two single beds, desks, and closets. Also, There is a bath room.
I like the sunshine in the morning coming through the windows where is on the wall of ours. It makes me feel good.
2. 방에 있는 가구나 가전 제품 묘사
I use our room with my roommate. It's really tiny for two. We don't keep our things a lot in it. If there is especially a good thing, we can clean the room easily.
We have two beds, desks, bookshelves, and closets. All of them are minimum size for using it. We always feel uncomfortable.
On my desk, there are my laptop, some books and cosmetics like a skin and a toner.
In the beginning, I only felt uncomfortable, but now I sometimes feel cozy by my room.
3. 집에서 가족들과 함께 하는 일
I'm very busy during the semester, so I sometimes spend time with my family in holiday such as the Thanks giving day.
We usually prepare breakfast together at home. My brother and his wife cook and I wash dishes. We often talk about how getting along each other during the meal. After breakfast, everyone relaxes. My house is bright and cozy. So, we often enjoy spending time to watch TV at home. Sometimes, my brother and I go to play bowling.
4. 최근에 집에 준 변화
I moved my house from 구의동 to 연희동. In the beginning, the house which I moved to was really messy. There were lots dusts on the floor and spiderwebs on the corner. Also, it had molds on the wall. these made me awful.
So, I cleaned my house for a couple of all days with my brother's family. And then My home was cozy and clean.
I can't change many things at home because of the rent house. So, I keep the house just clean.
첨삭 부탁드립니다. 감사합니다.
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