Part1.무난
Part 2.약간 실수했으나 무난
This photo was taken outdoor.
There are five people in this picture.
They are wearing warm clothes.
What i notice first is a old woman taking a picture.
On the left side of the picture, four people sitting(standing 으로 해야함)on the ground.
Everything seems to be peaceful.
It seems like winter.
Part 3.약간 실수
Q4.저번주 일요일에 갔고 가족과 갔다.
Q5.I usually buy military equipment. I lived in the country called 화천.Most people visit there to buy militaty equipment.
Q6.A unique item is most important thing. There are some reason. The purpose of people going to the souvenir shop is to find unique item. If there are not unique products, people are not visit there.
Part4 : 질문에 모두 답변
Part5 : 무난
인삿말하고
I just listened to your message and understand that you are looking for a way to attract the customers.
In that case, why don't we make a flyer with coupons, give them a on the street.
Also, I think it is good idea to hold a fashion show.
Finally, I recommend that give a discount coupon a month.
By doing that, we will be able to increase the number of customers.
마무리 인삿말
Part6.
I agree this statement.
Most of all,They have to hard for getting a goal. They have to focus on their goal. For example, when I was in(실수) a high school student, I had to study for 15 hours.It was very tired. But, As a result, I was able to enter good

좀 버벅이고 약간 문법적 실수가 있었는데 레벨 6 가능할까요?